The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

The

graph

shows the

growth

of the populations in India and China from 2000 and the expectations of the

growth

till 2050. It is clear from the

graph

that the

number

of the

population

is

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billions.

According to

what the

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shown

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that there is an increase

of

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in

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the populations of the two countries from 2000 until the

converge

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of the

population

number

in 2030.

In

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this

year has the two countries the same

population

number

and

it

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is almost 1.450

billions

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. After 2030, the total

population

of China dropped from 1.450 billion in 2030 to 1450 billion in 2050, It is obvious from the

graph

that it is the same

number

in 2015.

While

on the other hand

, after 2030 the

population

growth

of India still

increasing

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till it became 1.600

billions

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in 2050.

To sum up

, we could say that there is a significantly growing in the

population

of India from 2000 to 2050.

While

the

growth

in China gets lower from 2030 until 2050.