The graph below shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050.

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shows the

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of the populations in India and China from 2000 and the expectations of the

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till 2050. It is clear from the

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that the

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of the

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is

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billions.

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what the

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shown

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that there is an increase

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the populations of the two countries from 2000 until the

converge

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of the

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in 2030.

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year has the two countries the same

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and

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is almost 1.450

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. After 2030, the total

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of China dropped from 1.450 billion in 2030 to 1450 billion in 2050, It is obvious from the

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that it is the same

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in 2015.

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on the other hand

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, after 2030 the

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growth

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of India still

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till it became 1.600

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in 2050.

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, we could say that there is a significantly growing in the

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of India from 2000 to 2050.

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the

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in China gets lower from 2030 until 2050.