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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you. Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter advise them of your situation explain how this is affecting you request a new card You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear You should write at least 150 words.

#student #identification #card #director #services #situation #request #addresses
Dear Sir/Madam, My name is Madhuri. I am studying
second year
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 Computer Science subject in your
college
. I am writing
this
 letter to appeal for
new
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student
ID
card
 as I have lost my Identity
card
in
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college
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the college
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 premises on Friday when I came to
an
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apply
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attend extra class. I have been searching
from
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 two days and I am not able to find it. I am very
unahppy
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unhappy
 and depressed about
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losing
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loosing
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losing
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 the
ID
card
 as it is one of the paramount rules of our
college
 to bring the
student
card
 along with them.
Besides
, I have been facing many problems lately. I am afraid I cannot borrow the books from the university library without my
student
ID
card
 as my exams are coming in 2 weeks. It will be a terrible problem for me if
I
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I did not attend the exams.
Furthermore
, I
also
 requested our university transport services office about my problem as the transport
in charge
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didnot
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did not
 allowed me to
broad
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board
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 our
college
 bus and I was unaware that students can not travel unless they have the
student
 proof. And
same
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 with the computer department. I appreciate
if
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it if
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 you can approve a new
student
 Identification
card
 so that it will be beneficial for me to prepare for my exams as well as to use the university
student
 services. I have filled in and attached the New
ID
 request form
walong
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along
 with
this
 letter. I hope to get my new
ID
 as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Madhuri
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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