In modern times, young adult are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. Why has this change occurred? Do you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?
In recent years, communication of the young generation has increasingly drifted from their families to friendly relations.
This
reason has impacted by the development of technologies and spending time
into families together.
The technologies have an effect on inside of family relations due to convenience of communication tools. For instance
, every person has a mobile phone in our society and the using of this
technological development age is nearly 5 years old. Therefore
, the phone decreasingly occurs face to face chat among friendships. Additionally
, people forgot how spending time
with their friend on outdoors. This
factor indirectly effect on family relations between child and parents.
For providing family structure, the parents impose their children to spend more time
together. The children and parents are not aware this
because of busy and rush lives. Thus
, the main role is providing parent's rules at home. Although
Parents gathering the family easily, some young adult does not prefer passing leisure time
with their parent due to protecting the reputation among friendships. For instance
, spending more time
with friends is the most important preferences between young culture and some children think that it is not cool. However
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by parents, the meet formally
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