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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to the closing of all shops in town and cities. Do you agree or disagree

#growth #shops #town #cities
At present fast growing market is purchasing goods through
internet
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the internet
 because of many benefits
,
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,
 but certain people
belive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
 that it's effecting to close many shops in
cities
Suggestion
the cities
. I will argue that due to web
,
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,
 retails malls not close in the towns.
Firstly
, Nowadays, many people are purchasing household and personal things through online shopping because there are many advantages are there like
time
 saving, due to everyone busy in their schedules not
intersted
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
 to go to regular shops for
items
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items, hence
hence
,
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,
 placing orders through web
therefore
 easily getting things to footsteps in
couple
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a couple
 of hours
ratherthan
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rather than
 to spend much
time
 in travelling.
Secondly
, Choose different models
,
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,
 through
electornic market
Suggestion
electronic markets
electronic market
the electronic market
 easily identifies
what ever
one or some or every or all without specification
whatever
 they wanted in seconds and buying things through world wide.
For Example
,
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,
 AS per latest CNN survey
,
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,
 In Newyork 70% humans are buying Dress
,
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,
Televions
broadcasting visual images of stationary or moving objects
televisions
 and sofas due to reduce the travel
time
 and parking cost.
On the other hand
, mainly, due to globalization all the things are buying through laptops in sitting home
,
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,
however
, several public interested to go shopping because they can spend quality
time
 with family like gatherings like eating food and most of the malls are providing
play area
Suggestion
a play area
play areas
 to
childerns
hence
 they can spend
time
 with physical
activites
any specific behavior
activities
. On the top that they can trail and choose product if it's suitable
to
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for
 you or not.
For Instance
,
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,
 In many developing countries like India and Brazil lot of malls cultures increased and revenue
is generating
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is generated
 in
manyways
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many ways
. In conclusion, due to technology everyone is interested
to
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in
 buying their needs from house to saving
time
 and
money
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money, however
however
familes
a social unit living together
families
 are like shopping in malls because gatherings and enjoy
tthe
definite article
the
time
 with others.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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