Nowdays people make new friends throught social network and internet chat groups. some people think this is good. Others think that face to face interaction is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In
discussin
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussing
whether finding friends through the social media is good, one should bear in mind the complexity of
te
definite article
the
issue.
Although
some people think that meeting new friends online is good
becuase
for the reason that; on account of
because
it is easy and
accssible
capable of being reached
accessible
,
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
believe that
face
to
face
interaction is essential. In my opinion, personal interaction is required in order to find new friends because, aside from verbal
comunication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
, non verbal communication
further
strengthen the bond between people. In
this
essay, I will provide reasons and examples to support my view. One argument in
favor
promote over another
favour
of my opinion is that many people tend to not be fully open and honest while having a conversation through the social
medias
a means or instrumentality for storing or communicating information
media
.
For example
, more than 20% of the people in
chating
the act of acquiring something
getting
charting
websites reported to lie about their looks, height and weight when having a conversation online.
Furthermore
, these people
also
reported that because they tend to lie, they
dont
do not
don't
believe their
friends
Suggestion
friends'
responses and
therefore
do not consider them as true
frineds
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
.
This
example shows that
although
creating friend on the social media is possible, many of these are fictional and not true. Another point supporting my opinion is that in order to create a strong and lasting friendship, other non-verbal communications,
such
as body language and touch is required. To illustrate, When confronting a friend with sad news,
such
as the death of a close family member, the act of hugging and touching may be substantially more
helpeful
providing assistance or serving a useful function
helpful
hopeful
. By touching we can transfer feelings, like
saddness
emotions experienced when not in a state of well-being
sadness
or
grieve
intense sorrow caused by loss of a loved one (especially by death)
grief
, which creates a much deeper way communication.
This
example
demonstrate
Suggestion
demonstrates
, that in order to
truely
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
have a close friendship.
non
Suggestion
Non
verbal
cmmunication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
is essential. In conclusion, I maintain that
although
social media may initiate a conversation, true and lasting friendship can be done only by
face
to
face
conversations. It is the only way we can
truely
in accordance with truth or fact or reality
truly
know our friends.

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