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Some employers offer their employees subsidized membership of gym or sports clubs, believing that this will make their staff healthier and thus more effective at work. Other employers see no benefit in so doing. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Health is wealth.These three famous words
is
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are
 a
fact
abstaining from food
fast
 and absolutely True. Being fit and healthy should be the foremost target of each person in the current world situation.
Employer
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An employer
The employer
 who
offer
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offers
 subsidized gym membership believe that if
there
of them or themselves
their
 employer are fit and active, they can better perform in their job.
This
 can ultimately benefit the company. A subsidy will provoke them to join
gym
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a gym
the gym
 and built a habit to remain healthy.
This
 can help
releasing
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to release
 their stress, improve their mental health, their stamina and
this
 can lead to a better overall
personailty
the complex of all the attributes--behavioral, temperamental, emotional and mental--that characterize a unique individual
personality
personalities
.
On the other hand
, some employers feel
this
 will not contribute any benefit
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to
 their company.They believe
this
 will increase their
costand
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cost and
 nothing else. In conclusion, my opinion is to
offering
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offer
 subsidized gym
facilty
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facility
faculty
facilities
 will create a motivation
in
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In
 employee to perform better because he will feel fresh and active. Their performance will enhance which will benefit
business
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the business
.They will have
better image
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a better image
 for employers as they are feeling for
employees
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employees'
employee
 health.

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