You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make. Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter: • Introduce yourself. • Explain that you did not buy the items listed. • Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem. You do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:

#credit #card #bank #lists #purchases #manager #items #addresses

I would like to take

this

opportunity to introduce myself,

adidev

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added

employed with BCI as manager

marketing

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. I am writing

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letter to highlight some ambiguity in my credit card statement received from the bank. There are 3 luxury items purchased from the respective brand outlets. The

transactions

are dated

5th

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october

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in Chennai.

However

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was in Delhi on the said date.

Hence

below are the

transactions

which

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am certain the undersigned did not make, Armani suit, Rolex watch and Apple

Iphone

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iPhone

. As a precautionary

measure

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recommend that the credit card be blocked with immediate effect and request you to reverse the

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aforementioned

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afore mentioned

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as they are not executed by me.

Also

would like you to activate the OTP mechanism for all

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valued

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three thousand rupees. Thanking you Adidev

Mon Oct 21 2019

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
13Grammar mistakes
 

5 paragraphs

136 words

<4

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Greeting

In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both sides and express your opinion.

Today, many people do not know their neighbors in large city. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?