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In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

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There are more and more cities where the
used
a person who makes use of a thing; someone who uses or employs something
user
 of
video
 cameras has increased to stop the crimes, but there are people that think that
this
 is a way of restricting the people freedom. The increase of
video
 cameras in cities can give people a
felling
the experiencing of affective and emotional states
feeling
 of safety, they can think that if something is going on somebody will help them
fast
Suggestion
faster
.
Couple
Suggestion
A couple
af
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 years ago was on TV
that is
 a small town in
UK
Suggestion
the UK
 the
video
 cameras saw on a
banch
a long seat for more than one person
bench
 in
park
Suggestion
the park
a park
 a teddy bear that was there for days and days. The people took it to the
next
 level and they checked the teddy bear and after
that police
Accept comma addition
that, police
 got involved and they discovered that inside of it were drugs. Having more
video
 cameras in towns will maybe
desincrease
 the
crimial
someone who has committed a crime or has been legally convicted of a crime
criminal
 rates as they can be intimidated by
this cameras
Suggestion
this camera
these cameras
 knowing that police is looking and checking them. People may
fell
undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind
feel
 that they are over
controlled but
Accept comma addition
controlled, but
 in a world that the crime rates are going higher and higher the increase of
video
 cameras is becoming a
necesity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
. Overall the world is changing and people need to understand that safety
majors
any maneuver made as part of progress toward a goal
measures
 are increasing as well.
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