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The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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 of country's export values
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 2015 to 2016 and
below
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 change in each
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exports
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earninga
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earnings
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came from Petroleum and Engineered goods.In 2016 petroleum percentage
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incereased
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increased
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 engineered goods rises by 8.5% in 2016. Compared to the Gems and
jewellary
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jewellery
 exports
are
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decrease
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decreased
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 by 5.18% in 2016
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 earning of $43
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copmared
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compared
 to Agriculture products was maintained
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 lower amount in both
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years
.But gradually it has
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of
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 0.8% in 2016.
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 range and approximately changed in 2016
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 %31 billion and
inceased
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increased
 by 15.24% in 2016.

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentage" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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