Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solution can you suggest?

It is argued that most of the

offenses

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offences

are carried out after drinking intoxicants so many believe that putting prohibition on

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kind of drinks is an effective solution for decreasing the number of crimes.I disagree with

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view since it would not reduce the

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crime but

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crime, but

give rise to other crimes and other solution like increasing the strictness of punishment for illegal acts is more effective. Disallowing the use and selling of alcoholic beverages would result in the growth of other serious

crime

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like smuggling.

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is to say that alcoholic people

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in order

to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

there

of them or themselves

their

demand of alcohol will encourage themselves to commit another unlawful act of trafficking of

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this beverages

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these beverages

this beverage

. In Bihar

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example government

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example, government

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puts

prohibition on liquor in year 2016 for decreasing

crime

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rates but

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rates, but

the results they received

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have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)

were

exactly opposite

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of fall the rates rose by 13% in just 8 months of passing the law of prohibition. According to the Bihar police the reason behind the failure of

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act was the illegal selling and trafficking of the alcohol. The most viable way of dealing with the reduction of

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the number

a number

of

offenses

a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others

offences

offence

committed is to

increasing

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increase

the intensity of the

punsiments

the act of punishing

punishments

. Due

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there would be rise of fear in the mind of

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crimnal

someone who has committed a crime or has been legally convicted of a crime

criminal

criminally

ceremonial

minded people and

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would discourage them

form

a giver or sender

from

commiting

perform an act, usually with a negative connotation

committing

criminal activities.

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, in Dubai the punishment for theft done by a person more than twice is that they cut the hands of the culprit because of

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there is a fear and the

crime

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rates have gone down related to

thefts

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the thefts

. To Conclude, putting restriction on liquor is not an answer for reduction

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of

in

crimes as it not only would fail to

low

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lower

the

crime

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rate but

also

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introduce a new stream of illegal act. For controlling

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situation strict

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situation, strict

punishment for criminal actions is an effective solution.