You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a nearby town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you.

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Dear sir or Madam, I am writing to ask about some sort of electrical goods at "ADT Electric". Let me explain. Currently,

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I manage

the renovation of a local

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shop in Etobicoke. For

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reason, I am looking for lights, dryers, and fire sprinklers. A piece of professional advice would be

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helpful. Due to my estimation, we need 20 lights, 3 dryers and 10 sprinklers. There are of

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your website, so I would be glad to send the drawings. In

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case, it will be easier for you to understand what kind of products we are needed.

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, could you send us a quote with

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and conditions of payment? We would like to issue

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after receiving the order. By

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way, are we eligible to get a special offer or discount for big orders? In advance, let us know how long it takes to place and receive the order. I am looking forward to hearing from you back soon. Please, don't hesitate to contact me from Monday to Friday at any time. My phone number is 647-913-9646 or send me an email

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[email protected]. Best regards, Iryna Solovei

Sat Nov 16 2019

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

192 words

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