The chart below shows the proportion of male and female students studying six art-related subjects at a UK university in 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart demonstrates the number of male and female
students
who studied six different art courses at a
United Correct article usage
the
Kingdom based
University in 2011. (24)
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Kingdom-based
Overall
, the number of both male and female students
was the highest for English language and Literature. In comparison, the proportion
of female students
(250) was slightly higher than male students
(230) for the same subject. A similar trend with huge
difference in the Add an article
a huge
the huge
proportion
of male and female students
was recorded for Linguistics. Moreover
, exactly tripled
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triple
number
of female Change the article
a number
the number
students
(150) studied philosophy as compared to male students
(50). A slight difference, about 10, between male and female students
was seen for both History and Archeology or Communication and Media studies. However
, female students
dominated in
both of these courses. Art and design was the only subject in which the Change preposition
apply
proportion
of male students
(180) exceeded the female students
(160). (121)
In conclusion, the proportion
of research students
fluctuated in all the subjects, but a massive gap between male and female students
was found in philosophy. (25)Submitted by furqantaseer.ntu on
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