The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.

The chart below shows the proportion of males and females in Malaysia who commonly do physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where necessary.
The chart compares the percentage of Malaysian
men
and
women
in six
age
groups who did
physical
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exercise on regular basis in the year 2010. (25) In the youngest
age
group (15 to 24), almost 52% of Malaysian
men
but only around 47% of
women
involved themselves in regular physical activity in 2010.
However
, between the ages of 25 and 44,
men
were much less active on average than
women
. In comparison, in the 35 to 44
age
group, only 39.5% of males did some form of regular exercise, compared to 52% of females. Between the ages of 45 and 64, the figure for male physical activity rose significantly to around 45%,
while
the proportion of active females still remained 8% higher, at 53%.
Finally
, the ratio of both genders with
age
65 and over was almost identical, at approximately 47%. (115) The proportion of Malaysian males and females doing regular physical exercise fluctuated depending on their ages, but
women
dominated over
men
for all the
age
groups except (15 to 24). (30)
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  • proportion
  • gender distribution
  • physical activity
  • age group
  • percentage
  • comparative analysis
  • peak levels
  • notable differences
  • trends
  • discrepancies
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