Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion?

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on virtual

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has

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an influence

on our society harmony has caused a dispute. Among the people, there are some who strongly oppose any violent scene on TV or in games.

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, there are another bunch of people

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buy that opinion and believe it is not these fierce plots cause the

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problem in our society. Now, I wish to check both points,

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give my own view. Nowadays, many people are addicted to competition games which involve in a lot of

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blood

and violent situations.

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, objectors have sufficient

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reasons, believing

these inappropriate settings would affect people’s

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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damage social security. As an example, players indulging in military games often more likely to mimic the

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of roles in their game

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. They dream of using the weapons in the real

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, because an imaginary stuff can not make them satisfy. Considering the imitation is one nature of human beings, I really want to echo to

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point. But people who oppose above view say that

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claim takes the current situation too seriously and blaming the virtual

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violence

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for all the matters in

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the real world

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, is not valid.

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because we as humans have our own cognitions and

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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behaviours

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disciplines.

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, we are not influenced simply by the cruelty and rudeness in a fake scenario. There is no doubt that we can identify the reality and the imagination, while detaching from the latter. In conclusion, I

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these people who oppose the

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in cyber

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, because there are too many negative news about someone committed to crimes due to their intentions of following virtual life activities. When games can not let participants feel content, it is possible that some people seek real stimulus and excitement in their real life.

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, I do advocate entertainment industry companies should reflect themselves,

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make their products and services more harmonious and healthy for society development.