The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The chart presented below illustrates the
money
(in pence), one Use synonyms
britain
person used on fast Change the capitalization
Britain
foods
in one week. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Overall
, the chart shows that those Linking Words
britains
who have high income spent more Change the capitalization
Britains
pences
on different fast foods (Correct your spelling
pence
Hamburgers
, Use synonyms
Fish
and Use synonyms
Chips
, Pizza) as compared to those who have low income. The graph presents the Use synonyms
overall
Linking Words
consumption
of fast food in Use synonyms
grammes
in the period of two decades (1970 to 1990).
The chart which shows the Use synonyms
money
Use synonyms
spend
on fast food evaluates that people who have high income spent most of their Wrong verb form
spent
money
on Use synonyms
hamburgers
(over 40 Use synonyms
percent
) Change the spelling
per cent
while
they spent Linking Words
least
Correct article usage
the least
money
on Use synonyms
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
(under 20 Use synonyms
percnt
) Correct your spelling
per cent
however
for pizza they spent slightly under 20 Linking Words
pences
which means more than Correct your spelling
pence
pieces
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
.
The trend Use synonyms
of
Change preposition
in
consumption
of fast food illustrated in Use synonyms
graph
shows that from 1970 to 1990 the Add an article
the graph
consumption
of both Use synonyms
hamburgers
and pizzas Use synonyms
have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
rise
upto its maximum Wrong verb form
risen
grammes
(just under 100 to over 500 Use synonyms
grammes
for Use synonyms
hamburgers
) and (well under 100 to wee over 200 Use synonyms
grammes
for pizza). Use synonyms
On
contrast to Change preposition
In
this
Linking Words
consumption
Use synonyms
in
Change preposition
of
fish
and Use synonyms
chips
Use synonyms
is
declined from about 300 to approximately 200 from 1970 to around 1987 and Unnecessary verb
apply
then
again rise but in Linking Words
very
small amount.Add an article
a very
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, hamburgers, fish, chips, consumption, grammes with synonyms.
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