The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The chart presented below illustrates the
money
(in pence), one britain
person used on fast Change the capitalization
Britain
foods
in one week. Fix the agreement mistake
food
Overall
, the chart shows that those britains
who have high income spent more Change the capitalization
Britains
pences
on different fast foods (Correct your spelling
pence
Hamburgers
, Fish
and Chips
, Pizza) as compared to those who have low income. The graph presents the overall
consumption
of fast food in grammes
in the period of two decades (1970 to 1990).
The chart which shows the money
spend
on fast food evaluates that people who have high income spent most of their Wrong verb form
spent
money
on hamburgers
(over 40 percent
) Change the spelling
per cent
while
they spent least
Correct article usage
the least
money
on fish
and chips
(under 20 percnt
) Correct your spelling
per cent
however
for pizza they spent slightly under 20 pences
which means more than Correct your spelling
pence
pieces
fish
and chips
.
The trend of
Change preposition
in
consumption
of fast food illustrated in graph
shows that from 1970 to 1990 the Add an article
the graph
consumption
of both hamburgers
and pizzas have
Correct subject-verb agreement
has
rise
upto its maximum Wrong verb form
risen
grammes
(just under 100 to over 500 grammes
for hamburgers
) and (well under 100 to wee over 200 grammes
for pizza). On
contrast to Change preposition
In
this
consumption
in
Change preposition
of
fish
and chips
is
declined from about 300 to approximately 200 from 1970 to around 1987 and Unnecessary verb
apply
then
again rise but in very
small amount.Add an article
a very
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, hamburgers, fish, chips, consumption, grammes with synonyms.
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