The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. Compare it
The tables compare the percentages of British university
students
who spoke different languages
in addition
to English in two separate years.
It is noticeable that in both years, 2000 and 2010, the majority of British students
at the university in question were able to speak at least one other language. We can also
see an increase in the proportion
of second
and third language
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third-language
speakers
over the 10-year period.
In the year 2000, 80% of the students
were able to speak one or two foreign languages
, and 20% only spoke English. Ten years later, there was a rise of 5% in the proportion
of those who spoke a second
language. There was also
an increase, from 10% to 15%, in the proportion
of students
who were able to speak two foreign languages
.
Looking at the specific second
languages
spoken, in 2000, 30% of the students
were able to speak Spanish, 15% spoke French, and 10% spoke German. By 2010, the proportion
of Spanish speakers
had risen to 35%, there were 5% fewer French speakers
, and the figure for German speakers
remained at one in ten. Finally
, we can see that the percentage of speakers
of other second
languages
, apart from Spanish, French and German, rose from 15% to 20% over the period shown.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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