You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

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Dear Sir, I am writing

this

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letter regarding my

last

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visit

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the Spice Kitchen. Members of my organization are

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apply

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frequent visitors

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the restaurant and we have always enjoyed our meals here. Per contra, my

last

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visit was quite unsatisfactory and unpleasant. We had ordered our usual meal with Veg

chinese

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rice and Cottage cheese starters. To my

surprise

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the serving was very slow, which had taken around one and a half hours after our arrival. When we tried to complain about the delay

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our meal to the manager he was quite rude.

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waiter

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who attended us visited our table only thrice in the duration of our complete

staty

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stay

at the

resturant

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restaurant

.To add to the misery,

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was too hard to bite and vegetables in the rice were not cooked evenly. I am sure

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must have been the experience for various other customers as well.

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, I believe with additional attention

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these issues, they can be fixed. Kindly hire new staff in the

restaturant

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restaurant

so most visiting groups can be attended individually and have a good hospitality experience. Looking forward to

visit

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your restaurant soon again and see the improvements in the hosting nature of the

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. Yours Sincerely, Neha

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

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firstly
secondly
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in additional
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for example
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although
even though
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

206 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

In some countries, the government is encouraging business and industries to move outside city center and relocate to regional areas. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is not necessary for people to travel to other places to learn about the culture.We can learn as much as from books, films, and the Internet. To what extent do you agree or disagree?