You are a member of an organisation which meets regularly at a particular restaurant. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory. Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter explain why you are writing describe what went wrong with the meal and service suggest what the manager should do to ensure that you and your group return to the restaurant

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter regarding my
last
visit
at
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the Spice Kitchen. Members of my organization are
a
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frequent visitors
at
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the restaurant and we have always enjoyed our meals here. Per contra, my
last
visit was quite unsatisfactory and unpleasant. We had ordered our usual meal with Veg
chinese
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rice and Cottage cheese starters. To my
surprise
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the serving was very slow, which had taken around one and a half hours after our arrival. When we tried to complain about the delay
for
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our meal to the manager he was quite rude.
Additionally
,
waiter
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who attended us visited our table only thrice in the duration of our complete
staty
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stay
at the
resturant
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restaurant
.To add to the misery,
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was too hard to bite and vegetables in the rice were not cooked evenly. I am sure
this
must have been the experience for various other customers as well.
However
, I believe with additional attention
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these issues, they can be fixed. Kindly hire new staff in the
restaturant
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restaurant
so most visiting groups can be attended individually and have a good hospitality experience. Looking forward to
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your restaurant soon again and see the improvements in the hosting nature of the
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. Yours Sincerely, Neha
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