The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise it.

The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes. Summarise it.
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The first diagram illustrates the process of
cement
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manufacture, and the
second
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one
show
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the
materials
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that are used
while
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producing concrete.
It is clear that
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there are five stages in the production of
cement
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, beginning with the input of raw
materials
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and ending with the packaging of finished products. To produce concrete, four different
materials
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are mixed together.
At the first stage
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in
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the
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apply
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cement
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production, limestone and clay are crushed to form
powder
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a powder
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.
This
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powder later enters
into
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a mixer before passing into a rotating heater. After heating, the resulting mixture is poured onto
a
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the
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ground, and it is processed by a grinder.
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,
cement
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is produced and packaged in large bags.
Cement
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is one of the four raw
materials
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that are used in the production of concrete,
along with
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gravel, sand and water. To be exact, concrete consists of 50% gravel, 25% sand, 15%
cement
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and 10% water. All four
materials
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are blended together in a rotating machine called a concrete mixer.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words cement, materials with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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