Big salary is more important than job satisfaction.di you agree or disagree.

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It is considered by a section of society, huge amount of money is
vital part
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a vital part
as compared to job satisfaction. Where, I believe, pay is necessary for individuals
Having earn
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Having to earn
a lot of money is quite beneficial for people
,
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,
as it helps to improve the living standard of them. To put it simply, in
this
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competitive world almost everyone wants to get good wages from their job because they have dreams to live the luxury lifestyle as it is their role model
such
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as massive house, cars and so on.
However
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, with job satisfaction they cannot
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their dreams. It seems that the people who have
huge amount
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a huge amount
of money they can achieve
every thing
all things
everything
like as jobs or work, respect, self-satisfaction as well as
name
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the name
and fame
amomg
in the middle of
among
society

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remuneration
  • financial security
  • motivation
  • luxuries
  • material possessions
  • fulfillment
  • work-life balance
  • stress levels
  • mental well-being
  • job security
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