Is about if I will prefer to go have dinner with my friends at restaurant/ or my friends should contribute/ or I should cook.

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Dinners are meant to be enjoyed, and could be done

anyhow it

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anyhow, it

pleases the people involved. Some people believe that having

dinner

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with their friends would be enjoyed when they dine together at a

restaurant

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Whereas, some don’t believe so. In my opinion, I believe that having

dinner

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Suggestion

house

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and I

cooking

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cook

am cooking

for them without them contributing by buying the ingredients is the best. I feel

this

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way for a few reasons, which I would explore in the following essay.

First

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of all, going to the

restaurant

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will be expensive for some of my friends.. With the recent recession, people don’t have the luxury of going to a

restaurant

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to eat when they have bills to pay.

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, one of my closest friends Janes lost her job as an accountant in a corporate organization. She was the person solely responsible for paying her old

parents

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parents'

hospital bills and

house

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rent. She survived by working as a waitress in a

restaurant

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. The

last

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time our group of friends asked her to join us for

dinner

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at a

restaurant

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, she refused rightly because she can’t afford it. I felt awful about her not

been

the state or fact of existing

being

able to join us.

As a result

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, I decided that any time there are any suggestions about having

dinner

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, I would take up the responsibility of cooking in my

house

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and inviting them over.

In addition

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, I have a very spacious

house

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that can accommodate my friends and their families. Often times, when people go out in large numbers to dine. There is always a problem of space and they might end up not eating together.

For example

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, the

last

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time we had

dinner

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with my friends. It was not

thrilling

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thrilled

at all. We all come out at an agreed eatery, with all of our immediate families.We were like 20 in numbers, it was a huge issue for the management of the eatery to keep us at one table. They had to separate all of us and

this

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action made us not to enjoy the purpose of the outing. In conclusion, I firmly believe that my friends should have

dinner

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in my

house

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This

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is because going to the

restaurant

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would be expensive for some of my friends, and because my

house

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is spacious.

Mon Jan 27 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

380 words

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Is about if I will prefer to go have dinner with my friends at restaurant/ or my friends should contribute/ or I should cook.

Your opinion

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the most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. Two what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the past, people used to travel abroad to look many differences from their home country. Nowadays, the sceneries in places all over the world are more and more similar. What are the causes of the similarities? Do you think the advantages of this similarity outweigh the disadvantages?