The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1

The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Writing task 1
Japan’s
population
and trends The chart represents the
population
status in the country of Japan for every five
years
from 1950 to 2055. It has increased and decreased over the
years
. There is
table
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with data about the number and percentage of people
with
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65
years
and above.
Population
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in Japan in the year 1950 was 84.1 million, which
has
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kept increasing over the
years
until 2000. From the
years
2005 to 2015 we can notice that there is not much difference in the rate of
population
.
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, it
is
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decreased to 89.9 million by the
end
of 2055.
Overall
, on comparing the start and
end
of the mentioned
years
, the
population
has been
the
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similar. When we look
to
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the aged
population
in Japan, in 1950 it is recorded that 4.9% of the
population
are 65
years
and above. It is increased to 20% by the
end
of 2005 and another 14% is added for the year 2035 and by the
end
of 2055 it is 41
percent
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. So,
according to
the data represented,
the
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Japan’s
population
will be decreased by the
end
of 2055 and most of them will be aged above 60
years
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years, end with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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