The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing task 1
Japan’s
population
and trends
The chart represents the population
status in the country of Japan for every five years
from 1950 to 2055. It has increased and decreased over the years
. There is table
with data about the number and percentage of people Add an article
a table
with
65 Change preposition
apply
years
and above.
Population
in Japan in the year 1950 was 84.1 million, which Correct article usage
The population
has
kept increasing over the Unnecessary verb
apply
years
until 2000. From the years
2005 to 2015 we can notice that there is not much difference in the rate of population
. However
, it is
decreased to 89.9 million by the Unnecessary verb
apply
end
of 2055. Overall
, on comparing the start and end
of the mentioned years
, the population
has been the
similar.
When we look Change the article
apply
to
the aged Change preposition
at
population
in Japan, in 1950 it is recorded that 4.9% of the population
are 65 years
and above. It is increased to 20% by the end
of 2005 and another 14% is added for the year 2035 and by the end
of 2055 it is 41 percent
.
So, Change the spelling
per cent
according to
the data represented, the
Japan’s Correct article usage
apply
population
will be decreased by the end
of 2055 and most of them will be aged above 60 years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population, years, end with synonyms.
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