You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter * Describe the item. * Explain where and when you left it * Say what action you would like the company to take Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Margaret Hanna and I am one of the frequent

traveller

Change to a plural noun

travellers

show examples

on your train.I am writing to complain about the loss of my wallet on your train to Alexandria. The

first

Linking Words

point, when I was travelling with my family, I got out the tickets from my wallet; I put

the

Remove the article

apply

show examples

Correct pronoun usage

them

show examples

back in my bag, but

Correct pronoun usage

they

show examples

slipped and fell on the train’s chair and I did not recognise

Correct pronoun usage

them

show examples

. Another thing I want to mention, it is a black leather wallet and it contains

Correct the article-noun agreement

apply

show examples

various valuable items like my identification card, credit card, and some cash.

Moreover

Linking Words

, there is a card which is a valuable gift from my daughter. I would be grateful if you could help me to find it.

Furthermore

Linking Words

, I have a request and I would appreciate it if you can inform the railway staff, who was working

Change preposition

show examples

that time about the lost item. I look forward to hearing from you and thank you in advance for your concern. If you need any extra information, please feel free to contact me. Faithfully yours, Margaret Hanna

margaret.milad1Tue Jan 28 2020

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

3
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
7
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

186 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

Topic Vocabulary:

valuable item
distinctive features
left behind
compartment
last seen
retrieved
item description
identifying information
contact
lost and found
appropriate department
expeditious
immediate assistance
trace
recovery

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

<4
band
In many parts of the world, people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home. This is a bad idea because home-cooked food is much better for us. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Nowadays, every working person has a hectic schedule. Pupils become more depending on eating packed food or prepared food from superstore or restaurants. I agree with this notion that eating processed food may causes so many diseases, spend to much money, makes you become more lazy.
6.5
band
In the digital age, newspapers face challenges in maintaining their relevance as sources of information. Some argue that the rise of online news platforms renders traditional newspapers obsolete, while others contend that they continue to play a crucial role in society. Discuss both views and provide your opinion!
News is a printed or online publication that provides news, articles, and advertisements, usually on a daily or weekly basis. It is information for the public, covering some topics such as events, politics, business, sports, entertainment, etc. Nowadays, newspapers are facing challenges in staying relevant as information sources. However, the rise of online news platforms makes newspapers outdated, while others believe that newspapers still play an important role in society.
4.5
band
Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations
Some education institutions pupils live together their parents while others live away from house because their education institutions are in kind of places. There are a lot of advantages and disadvantages of both conditions.
<4
band
Some people say that the only reason for learning language is in order to travel ro or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true many individuals argued about that learning another language does not necessary for them. On the other hand, some peoples statement that learning strangers language will be help for them. In my opinion, it will be depends about the context.
7
band
You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to - explain the reason why you decline the offer - express you gratitude - explain you like your current job very much
I am writing in response to the offer I have received from your company. First of all, I would like to express my gratitude for this amazing opportunity; however, unfortunately, I would not be able to accept it. Allow me to elaborate on this.

In many parts of the world, people are relying more and more on prepared food from grocery stores and restaurants because they are too busy to cook at home. This is a bad idea because home-cooked food is much better for us. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Many university students live with their families while others live away from home because their universities are in different places. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both situations

Some people say that the only reason for learning language is in order to travel ro or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You cannot go to a company where you got an offer. Write a letter to the HR supervisor to - explain the reason why you decline the offer - express you gratitude - explain you like your current job very much