The consumption of the world resources such as oil or water is increasing at a dangerous rate What are causes and solutions ?

Some scientists say that if people go on consuming natural resources
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at
the high rate
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it could be very dangerous to the future of humanity and There are several reasons why
daily
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the daily consumption
consumption
of natural resources
such
oil or
water
has been increased dramatically
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Some
world organizations are seeking solutions to
this
problem.
First
of all urbanization is the main reason and the number of people in some countries has been increased by three or four times than before
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their daily
consumption
is based on the
water
and oil resources has
also
raised dramatically
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In
such
occasion what should we to decrease daily
consumption
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Of course it is high time for humanity to change their daily consumptions on natural resources with renewable ones.
In addition
to the problem that I mentioned above in world countries have gigantic factories which use more natural resources rather than people and it causes some serious problems
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they consume fresh
water
and emission rubbish to rivers and oceans as
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a result
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its
most
water
creatures are suffering.
Besides
that motorcars on the roads of worldwide are consuming more petroleum and gases which can be harmful to our health and to decrease some bad sides of
this
situation we have to use less harmful transport means
such
as public transport or cars which runs on electricity. As a
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conclusion, I
think that we should save the natural resources to our generation and of course they
also
have rights to use them like us. As well as we must decrease our daily
water
and oil
consumption
instead
of using them useless.

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