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Women and men are commonly seen as having different strengths and weakness. Is it right to exclude males or females from certain professions because of their gender

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Female and male
similarly
 seen as having variety of ability and vuln
erabili
Suggestion
a variety
ty. It is always argued to exclude males or females from a special careers because of their se
x. I co
Suggestion
career
mpletely agree with
this
 opinion and think
that is
 correct to prohibit both genders in some categories of vocation in because of their gender.
First
 of all, I believe that men are suitable for doing hardwork
profession
 whether
it is p
Suggestion
hard work
h
ysical or mental.
Accept comma addition
profession, whether
 Male are always restless and critical thinkers when they are in administration aspects, construction buildings, and
huge projects
Accept comma addition
construction, buildings
that is
 needed a man force. Problems and wars are employed by men to overcome their peer enemies in other groups. According to the department of labor in Somaliland, the nu
mber
a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
of women in construction, army and politics is less than 5 percent in the six regions of Somaliland. The capaplity of doing task dep
ends on b
the quality of being capable -- physically or intellectually or legally
capability
y gender handling that activity.
Secondly
, in my point of view is that women are good for family services and basic activities
profession
which do not need to use m
Suggestion
the basic activities profession
ore energy. Women have more affection and love for family members
that is
 way they often do like: car
ing
Suggestion
the way
 babies, preparing food, washing clothes and neating accommodations.
For
exampl
a quantity of no importance
nothing
beating
meeting
e lots of teenage gir
ls decide to
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example, lots
 stay their home and serve for their families. So being women is a being like a mother and all women have that sense to so support family as housewife.
Suggestion
the family
families
a family
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a housewife
 To sum up, I completely agree with
this
 opinion and think
that is
 correct to keep out both genders in some categories of occupation because of their gender and, I believe that men are suitable for doing hardwork
profession
 whether
it is p
Suggestion
hard work
h
ysical or mental w
Accept comma addition
profession, whether
hile women are good for family services and basic activities
profession
which do not need to use m
Suggestion
the basic activities profession
ore energy.

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