The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In
1974-2002, there are four different modes of transport used in transporting Change preposition
From
goods
in the UK. These modes of transport are by road, water, rail and pipeline.
Using pipeline
is more constant because Fix the agreement mistake
pipelines
million
tonnes of Correct article usage
the million
goods
are increasing steadily between 1978-1982 and 1990-1998. The rest of the year is constant.
On the other hand
, when using rail line
is more tricky because Fix the agreement mistake
lines
through
the years, Add the comma(s)
,through
goods
are decreasingly fluctuating. But in 1995, it is starting to increase until in
2002.
Another constant in transporting Change preposition
apply
goods
is when using shipping by water. Between 1981-1992, the goods
transported are the dame in amount
of million tonnes with a very Add an article
the amount
difference
with each other.
Replace the word
different
Lastly
, transporting by road is also
effective even though there are times that goods
transported decrease, but will increase rapidly for approximately 4 years range.
In conclusion, using pipelines and by
water is the most constant in transporting Change preposition
apply
goods
while
using rail lines are
more complicated and using Correct subject-verb agreement
is
road
Add an article
the road
are
the most successful.Correct subject-verb agreement
is
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