The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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1974-2002, there are four different modes of transport used in transporting
goods
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in the UK. These modes of transport are by road, water, rail and pipeline. Using
pipeline
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pipelines
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is more constant because
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the million
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tonnes of
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are increasing steadily between 1978-1982 and 1990-1998. The rest of the year is constant.
On the other hand
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, when using rail
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is more tricky because
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the years,
goods
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are decreasingly fluctuating. But in 1995, it is starting to increase until
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2002. Another constant in transporting
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is when using shipping by water. Between 1981-1992, the
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transported are the dame in
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the amount
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of million tonnes with a very
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with each other.
Lastly
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, transporting by road is
also
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effective even though there are times that
goods
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transported decrease, but will increase rapidly for approximately 4 years range. In conclusion, using pipelines and
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water is the most constant in transporting
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while
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using rail lines
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more complicated and using
road
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the road
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are
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the most successful.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Overview
  • Trend
  • Fluctuation
  • Peak
  • Trough
  • Increase
  • Decrease
  • Stability
  • Mode of transport
  • Quantity
  • Comparison
  • Goods
  • Transported
  • Significant
  • Noticeable
  • General trend
  • Time span
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