The graph below shows the contribution to different sectors of Indian economy in 1950,1970 and 1990. Summarise the information, by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
The bar graph depicts the different
sectors
contributed
to Correct pronoun usage
that contributed
Indian
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the Indian
economy
in the year 1950, 1960 and 1970. Where, the sectors
are Industries, self employment
, Add a hyphen
self-employment
Service
Correct article usage
the Service
sector
and Agriculture.
Industries economy
in the year 1950 was 20%, were
it rose to 27% in 1970 and fell to 17% in 1990 which has Correct your spelling
where
sudden
dip of 10% in Add an article
a sudden
20years
. Correct your spelling
20 years
Self employment
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Self-employment
economy
was least among all the sectors
in the year 1950, It has
increased to 25% from 7% which is a major boom in 1970, and it followed the same rise and hiked to 37% in 1990 stood as Unnecessary verb
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a
greatest Change the article
the
sector
in Contribution.
Although
, Service
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the Service
sector
had 27% of economy
in 1950 it Add an article
the economy
has
decreased to 23% in 1970, Unnecessary verb
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has
followed Unnecessary verb
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the
same fall in 1990Change preposition
by the
to
, which is just 7%. It Change preposition
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has
experienced the greatest fall between 1970 and 1990 compared to other Unnecessary verb
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sectors
. Agriculture was the biggest sector
in contributing economy
in 1950which was 35%, It is
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also
decreased to 18% in 1970 and to 10% in 1990.
Overall
, Industries fluctuated from 20% to 18% it was steady, although
, Self employment
hiked from 7% to 36% which was a major rise among all Add a hyphen
Self-employment
sectors
, Service sector
and Agriculture sector
fell from a high contribution to low
between 1950 and 1990.Correct article usage
a low
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sectors, economy, sector with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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