Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It has been discussed previously by l
ot
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a lot
lots
of people that big
salary
is much more important than
job
s
atisfication.
the contentment one feels when one has fulfilled a desire, need, or expectation
satisfaction
I strongly agree with
this
opinion.
To begin
with let me express few things. We are living in a world which is growing day by day and seconds by seconds. S
ame
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The same
is happening with today’s living cost and personal expenses
,
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,
it is
also
hiking every s
econds.
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second
There was a period we were happy with less salaries and lived our life with good
job
satisfaction
. Now we can’t chose that option. Even if we are having stress or pressure it is good to get big
salary
jobs to meet the daily expenses. There are l
ot
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lots
of examples in my friend circle who is getting low salaries and they are fighting every month to meet t
here
of them or themselves
their
expenses. We need to think about our family
,
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,
they need to be cared well. They need to have good a
commadation
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodations
accommodation
,
Accept space
,
they need to have good food
,
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,
clothes and our kids need to be educated well.
Last
but least there should be some savings t
o
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in
f
uture.
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the future
We will not be able to cover all these with less salaries. So a big
salary
is very important. Some people will say that
job
satisfaction
is m
ain thing but
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the main thing, but
the main thing but
if you are not able to pay your bills and maintain your expenses,
then
what is the use of having only
job
satisfaction
. If you can’t provide
satisfaction
to your f
amily
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family, then
then
you are not s
uccess
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successful
in your life. To conclude, big
salary
is much more important than
job
satisfaction
. It makes our family to live happy and s
tandared
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standard
life in society. The smiles of our loved ones will d
efinetly
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
make us happy to work under stress and pressure. Show quoted text

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