The chart and table below give information about population figures in Japan. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Population
has been a tremendous factor in a country’s development. Add an article
The population
Summary
of Japan’s Correct article usage
A summary
population
in
earlier, now and in future has been provided. Change preposition
apply
This
essay will discuss about
the variations in japans Remove the preposition
apply
population
in
different timescales.
The crowd level of the country is least in past with only about 84.1 Change preposition
at
million
people and there is an extensive increase of
Change preposition
in
population
between 1990 to 2015 with less
deviations. The elevated level of people was from 123.6 to 125.4 Change the quantifier
fewer
million
in 25years
.the Correct your spelling
25 years
population
shows sudden
drop of Add an article
a sudden
15million
persons Correct your spelling
15 million
at
2035.Change preposition
in
After
this
the Add a comma
,this
population
tend to decrease to 89.9million
almost similar to the earlier 1950s.
The data showed Correct your spelling
89.9 million
percentage
of people aged Add an article
the percentage
a percentage
65years
or over is 4.9% Correct your spelling
65 years
withy
4.1 Correct your spelling
with
million
headcounts in 1950 and there will be a dramatic uplift to 41% in future with 36.5million
champs. The Correct your spelling
36.5 million
population
increase could lead to increased demands for food and other resources. This
can be controlled by birth control measures that should be taken by the government.
To conclude
Japan’s population
will be extending in upcoming years and measures has
to be carried out to control it.Correct subject-verb agreement
have
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