As most people spend a mahor part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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Nowadays, due to the fact that we spend most of our life working, many have questioned how is it possible to rise
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satisfaction. In my opinion, it is not only a matter of payment, but
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and more importantly a matter of recognition. These two factors play a key role in the motivation of every kind of jobs, and careers. Money has always been the main incentive used by companies, in fact, there are careers,
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as manager or seller, that have been historically built up using the concept that the more you give, the more you gain. More often now than ever, workers are overworked and underpaid, with increasing dissatisfaction. Companies have no idea about what exactly their employees do, so the old mindset to give
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reason it has to be found a way to
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raise the level or amount of something
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salaries.
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can motivate a lot of people in doing their tasks.
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, the
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should recognize more the
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done.
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it is
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that people who have major responsibilities are the one in the spotlight, it has to be
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noticed all the hard work that stands at the base. Every big selling, every big discovery or big accomplishment
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from the synchronization of different efforts from many people and there has to be a way to make sure that
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is not going unseen. Increasing in pay-check and in the ability of recognizing hard work would guarantee a better lifestyle and a more positive mindset for the employee. These measures can motivate a lot of people in doing their tasks, because it is human nature trying to better its own status and its happiness, representing a way to gain
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satisfaction for all workers, and it is
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doable, in fact, a
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can monitor the real amount of work accomplished with daily or weekly activity check. In my view, activity check would
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benefit the
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, heading off the chance of employee being paid for jobs that are not really accomplished, or the ones who are payed just for their position in the
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more than their actual
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. Overall, it is my opinion that
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having the requisite qualities or resources to meet a task
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pay and recognition of individual value are the best ways to increase
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satisfaction. Because there are easy ways to achieve
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result, it is
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something that many different workplaces can implement.
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would lead to motivate workers and successful companies.
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