The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia.

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the line charts,

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the

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employment in Freedonia,

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gender bases. And the differences between

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happen between 1975 and 1995. we can notice from the charts, there

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for women

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in

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sector (non-defence) .

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that

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manufacturing sector the

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are the same between the

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1975 and 1995.

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around 640000 and 300000 respectively.

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women increase sharply in wholesale and retail trade in the year 1995 and

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exceed the

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men by 800000 and 75000 respectively . In conclusion, there's a

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contribution

for both gender in all

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, but

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that the

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for women during the thirteen years increased, and their share in GDP became more in

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of Freedonia.