You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. I n your letter • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

you

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to express my deep gratitude splendid time which I

have

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spend

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your restaurant on my friend’s

birthday

. It was a busy Saturday night of

last

week, we were twenty

peoples

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dropped there to celebrate my friend’s 36th

birthday

. Arup was our childhood friend and rarely

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get time to celebrate any occasion. But Arup’s

birthday

was on

last

Saturday, so we planned to visit your restaurant and store some valuable memories in our

heart

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. As we have just dropped to your restaurant without any reservation. We have expressed our plan to your receptionist and she was very helpful as she was able to provide a private hall within fifteen minutes. All the staffs are generous and suggestive for our evening snacks and dinner. Foods are very

testy

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and hot

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reasonable

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price. We are amazed, overwhelmed and surprised when your chef gave us

giant

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cake

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free of cost for Arup’s

birthday

. I will decently recommend to everyone for your service and delicious food to visit your place. Please feel free to publish

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letter in your customer survey circulation and contact me if you need any more feedback. Thanking you, With Faithfully Kuntal Mondal

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Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

9 paragraphs

204 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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