You and some friends ate a meal at restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were very pleased with the food and services. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. I n your letter • Give details of your visit to the restaurant • Explain the reason for the celebration • Say what was good about the food and the services

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

you

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to express my deep gratitude splendid time which I

have

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spend

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your restaurant on my friend’s

birthday

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. It was a busy Saturday night of

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week, we were twenty

peoples

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dropped there to celebrate my friend’s 36th

birthday

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. Arup was our childhood friend and rarely

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get time to celebrate any occasion. But Arup’s

birthday

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Saturday, so we planned to visit your restaurant and store some valuable memories in our

heart

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. As we have just dropped to your restaurant without any reservation. We have expressed our plan to your receptionist and she was very helpful as she was able to provide a private hall within fifteen minutes. All the staffs are generous and suggestive for our evening snacks and dinner. Foods are very

testy

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and hot

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reasonable

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price. We are amazed, overwhelmed and surprised when your chef gave us

giant

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cake

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free of cost for Arup’s

birthday

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. I will decently recommend to everyone for your service and delicious food to visit your place. Please feel free to publish

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letter in your customer survey circulation and contact me if you need any more feedback. Thanking you, With Faithfully Kuntal Mondal

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

204 words

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