The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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These chats describe the percentage of the
customer
service
rated in the parkway Hotel by asking to
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guests
over a peiod
of five years between 2005 and 2010. Correct your spelling
period
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the hotel’s guests
rate on
satisfactory and good the most for the Change preposition
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customer
service
while
excellent and very poor are just a little amount.
In 2005, most of the guests
give satify
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satisfy
on
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with
customer
service
at 45% while
poor and very poor of
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customer
service
were only 21% and 15%. The pecentage
of good Correct your spelling
percentage
service
show Similar to the very poor which is 14%, but excellent service
was very low at just 5% over that period.
In 2010, the percentage change
notably because visitors tend to Replace the word
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evaluatated
that the Correct your spelling
evaluate
customer
sevice
was good at 39% Correct your spelling
service
while
excellent and satify
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satisfy
to
the Change preposition
with
service
were at just 28% and 17%. However
poor sevice
are drop down from 21% in 2005 to 12% in 2010 even Correct your spelling
service
the
very poor Correct word choice
though the
sevice
was rated only 4% by the Correct your spelling
service
guests
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we can notice that the Correct pronoun usage
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service
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hotel
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