The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
These chats describe the percentage of the
customer
service
rated in the parkway Hotel by asking
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100
guests
over a
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period
of five years between 2005 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that the hotel’s
guests
rate
on
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satisfactory and good the most for the
customer
service
while
excellent and very poor are just a little amount. In 2005, most of the
guests
give
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satisfy
on
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customer
service
at 45%
while
poor and very poor
of
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customer
service
were only 21% and 15%. The
pecentage
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percentage
of good
service
show Similar to the very poor which is 14%, but excellent
service
was very low at just 5% over that period. In 2010, the percentage
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notably because visitors tend to
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evaluate
that the
customer
sevice
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service
was good at 39%
while
excellent and
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satisfy
to
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the
service
were at just 28% and 17%.
However
poor
sevice
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service
are drop down from 21% in 2005 to 12% in 2010 even
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very poor
sevice
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service
was rated only 4% by the
guests
that
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we can notice that the
service
i
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the
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hotel
was
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improved.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words customer, service, guests with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • customer service
  • questionnaire
  • survey
  • respondents
  • rating scale
  • hospitality
  • customer satisfaction
  • comparison
  • data
  • trends
  • improvement
  • deterioration
  • feedback
  • service areas
  • hospitality industry
  • guest experience
  • satisfaction level
  • to rate
  • significant
  • frequency
  • percentage
  • chart
  • bar graph
  • pie chart
  • analysis
  • conclusion
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