The bar chart shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows the percentage of australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart sets against the proportion of Australian men and women in diverse age groups who became involved in
regular
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a regular
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physical
workout
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in 2010. Obviously, among
males
, teenagers did more exercise
while
females
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aged 45 to 54 engaged in more physical activities compared to teenage females.
According to
the facts of the bar chart, the percentage of
males
who worked out beyond others reached 52,8%, but, till 35-44, the balance of
this
activism dwindled
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a significant extent (39,5%).
However
, the symmetry of
this
activism went up to 46,7% beginning from
males
aged 45 to 54,
till
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senior
males
aged 65 and over. On the opposite, the most strenuous females were those
who
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aged 45 to 54 which corresponds
53,3
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%. It can be specified that young women were less active in comparison with juvenile men. In like manner, the proportion of men and women who are 65 and over was almost the same
with
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46,7% and 47,1%.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Percentage
  • Australian men
  • Australian women
  • Age groups
  • Regular physical activity
  • Participated
  • Increased
  • Decreased
  • Proportion
  • Physically active
  • Gender difference
  • Engaged
  • Exercise
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