You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Task: Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements. Let them know when you will be arriving and leaving, what type of rooms you would like, and ask them how much the weekend will cost. Also enquire about activities and places of interest near the hotel.
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my pending arrival to
your Beach resort. I would like to plan ahead, the details of my arrival, room arrangements and several fun activities I would like to engage my family in as well as the total cost of my stay.
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at
Firstly
, I will arrive at The Resort on Friday 25th of October and leave on the Sunday 27th of October.
Secondly
, I am coming along with my wife and my 2 children ( a boy and a no girl). We would like the deluxe suite, in
addition
my children would like a room with double beds. I think Add a comma
,addition
this
would be ideal for us.
Thirdly
, during this
2 days, I plan on having a swell time with the family, so I would like to book a Spa session upon my arrival, Correct determiner usage
these
then
movie night as well on Friday. on Saturday your website States you have an amusement park, this
would keep the children busy and entertained, while my wife and I would go shopping. Then
on Sunday before we depart we plan on going to your Greek Museum, to see sculptures of ancient Greek myths and so much more.
I would like to Know
the full cost of my stay during Correct your spelling
know
this
period and moreover
, I hope my plans would be worked on, and I wouldn't get any suprises
during my visit. Yours Faithfully Anthony McmaduCorrect your spelling
surprises
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