Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solution can you suggest?

It is commonly believed by most people that the best way to reduce the misconduct rate that occurred by alcoholic people is that the government should prohibit the selling and consuming the

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. In my opinion, I

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measurement as I think

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is not an effective method to solve

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issues

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the long term

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essay, I would discuss the reason why ban liquor is not the best solution and propose other ways to deal with

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critical problem. With regard to the banning of

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from

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the government

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policy may encourage more people to purchase and consume wine and beer in illegal ways.

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poeple

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have more incentive to commit the

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by importing the

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through the border of the country and trade in the black market which outside the control of official authorities.

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kind of solution will not reduce the

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rate involving

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consumption in

long term

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the long term

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, encourage people to misconduct against the law. The effective methods to discourage people from consuming

alcohol

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would be educating the drawbacks and increase the price of

alcohol

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, it is very important to ensure that people, especially, the young generation aware and realize the disadvantage of consuming beer and wine. Once children acknowledge the negative impact when they consume a large amount of

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or when there is the accident cause

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being unconscious, they will avoid the bad drinking habit.

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, authority can discourage people from trading liqueur by increasing the price of

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the product

or amount of taxation,

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will reduce the number of people who can afford on expensive drinking.

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,

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solution will decrease the number of drinking

alcohol

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and

crime

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commit by involving in bad habit drinking. In conclusion, the prohibition of selling liquor can be one of the method to decrease the amount of

crime

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committed from alcoholic people;

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, it is not the most effective ways to resolve

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issue in

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the long run

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, the government should educate people on the drawback of drinking and raising the price of purchasing

alcohol

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to discourage people and reduce the unlawful action rate on involving alcoholic cases.