When the time comes to commence full-time employment, individuals who have graduated from university deserve a higher salary than those who have not. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Now a day's competition of getting into a good college has increased and after passing out the fight to get employment is even more competitive.Graduates from good institute often demand high salaries as they are passed from
one
of the best colleges, some people believe that they should get more salary whereas some believe that it is the quality of
education
witch matters. In
this
essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will present both sides of views and conclude by presenting my views on the same. It is always believed that
one
can get better
education
only by studying in
one
of the best universities which is true if look into the people who are at the top position
for example
CEO of Google Mr. Sundar Pichai he has completed his
education
from IIT which is
one
of the best colleges in India.
Also
If we look into the top B-Schools like IIMs the average package which students get is around 20-22lpa; though it's not easy to get into these top colleges
one
needs to be best in it. Contrary to
this
there are many big shots who are at the leading position without even completing their
education
Accept comma addition
education, for
for example
Facebook CEO Mark Zuckerburg or Microsoft CEO Mr.Bill Gates, but still holding the best position for their companies. I strongly believe more than the university name its the quality of
education
which matters a lot.
One
might get into
best college
Suggestion
the best college
, but what if after going there doesn't studying
then
in that case you will not have a proper knowledge but still
one
is from best collage should get a better
salarysalary
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salary salary
than the
one
who is fantastic in their subject but is from average college?? I don't
this
so. To summarize, I strongly believe it should the quality which should matter rather than the tag, as with tag there could be
possibility
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a possibility
the possibility
that the candidate might not deserve the best salary.

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