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The given tabular graphs represent the proportion of British
students
who can speak other languages apart from English, at one university in England, in the year
2000 and 2010. Fix the agreement mistake
years
This
passage will highlight on main features.
In these
Correct determiner usage
this
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graphs
graph
Add a comma
,graph
students
are divided into 6 different types, Such
as
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apply
students
who speak only one language
that is
French, Spanish or German and Student
who can speak another, Fix the agreement mistake
Students
two
other or even no other language
.
In year
2000, Change the article
the year
Student
who speak only German
Correct article usage
the German
language
and student
who speak two
other languages is
given Change the verb form
are
same
Correct article usage
the same
as
10%, Change preposition
apply
whereas
students
who can speak only French and students
who can speak another language
is given to be 15%. Remaining
Correct article usage
The remaining
two
are students
who speak no other language
which is about 20% and language
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the language
that is
spoken mostly by Add an article
the student
a student
student
is Spanish which is about 30%.
In comparison to 2000, Fix the agreement mistake
students
percentage
given for each type has changed a lot. As we see Add an article
the percentage
this
year, student
who speaks No other Add an article
a student
the student
language
and French has shrunk to 10% each from 20% and 15%.
The German language
is spoken equally by 10% students
. Change preposition
of students
Whereas
, students
who speak two
other languages, Another language
and Spanish language
have increased from 10%, 15% and 30% to 15%, 20% and 35% respectively.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "that is, whereas".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, language, student, two with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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