The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where 

relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts give information concerning
water
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usage for industrial, agricultural,
domestic
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and domestic
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purposes in six different regions.
According to
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them, South America, Africa,
South
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and South
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East
Asia
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had the highest percentage
for
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of
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agricultural activity.
In particular
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, Central
Asia
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, Africa,
South
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and South
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East
Asia
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used
water
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for farms more than 80%. It is
also
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observed that the area with mass consumption
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water
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of water
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for agriculture had the lowest percentage of industrial and domestic use.
Otherwise
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, North
America
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American
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and Europe diagrams illustrate the difference between other regions. They used
water
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for industrial ways more than for farming or house works.
Lastly
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, it is noteworthy that domestic
water
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use didn't pass over 20% in any region. Especially in Central
Asia
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and South East
Asia
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shows that they had the lowest same percentage of
water
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use for householding. In general, it's seen that a great quantity of
water
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used for farms works much more than other purposes.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, asia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • water consumption
  • agricultural, industrial, domestic
  • usage patterns
  • developed vs developing regions
  • irrigation systems
  • climate factors
  • percentage breakdown
  • water management
  • sustainability
  • residential water use
  • efficiency
  • charts comparison
  • water-intensive
  • water scarcity
  • resource allocation
  • desalination
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