The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain. The graph shows the trends in consumption of fast food. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shows below.
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One study about the fast
food
in Britain was focus in two topic: the first part showed the amount of money per week
that british people spent in junk food
, and on the other hand
the investigation showed the trends of consumption
in fast food
.
The research split the amount of money per week
in three kind of social income: high, average and low, where the investigation figure out that the high income spent 45 pounds per week
, and the low income waste 7 pounds per week
. Also
, the study showed that fast food
most popular consumption
was hamburger and the pizza was chose like the fewer favorite.
Beside, the study show the habits of consumption
of fast food
in three decades (1970-1990), where the investigation reveals that fish and chips have been decresse their consumption
and the hamburger and pizza have been increese their popular in the people in Britain.
Nevertheless
the favorite fast food
in Britain is Hamburger, because the people in 1990 consumption
500 grammes.Submitted by rominahuaiquil on
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