The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The amount of one country’s
exports
in disparate trades ,during 2015 and 2016, is displayed in the provided diagram, and the grid below exhibits the variation in the proportion of each trade of exports
comparing 2015 and 2016. Overall
, it could be found that the rise in the percentage of the
exported textiles was the highest in 2016 compared to 2015.
Regarding Correct article usage
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to
the graph, Remove the preposition
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export
of petroleum products Correct article usage
the export
had
soared in 2016 in comparison with 2015 by 3%. Moving to engineered goods, the exporting traffic had soared in 2016 by 8.5% ,which is 1.5 times higher than the proportion of petroleum products, Unnecessary verb
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while
there was a recession at
the exported gems and jewellery by 5.18%. Change preposition
in
Additionally
, in 2016, percentage
of agricultural products ,that Correct article usage
the percentage
was
exported, had recorded a slight increase Correct subject-verb agreement
were
by
0.81% Change preposition
of
unlike
textiles Add the comma(s)
,unlike
exports
that
had doubled the exported percentage of exported engineering goods, since its Correct pronoun usage
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exports
had surged by 15.81% compared to 2015.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "soared" was used 2 times.
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