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The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

The chart below shows the value of one countries exports in various categories during 2015 in 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
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The amount of one country’s
exports
 in disparate trades ,during 2015 and 2016, is displayed in the provided diagram, and the grid below exhibits the variation in the proportion of each trade of
exports
 comparing 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, it could be found that the rise in the percentage of
the
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exported textiles was the highest in 2016 compared to 2015. Regarding
to
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the graph,
export
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the export
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 of petroleum products
had
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soared in 2016 in comparison with 2015 by 3%. Moving to engineered goods, the exporting traffic had soared in 2016 by 8.5% ,which is 1.5 times higher than the proportion of petroleum products,
while
 there was a recession
at
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 the exported gems and jewellery by 5.18%.
Additionally
, in 2016,
percentage
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 of agricultural products ,that
was
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 exported, had recorded a slight increase
by
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 0.81%
unlike
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 textiles
exports
that
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had doubled the exported percentage of exported engineering goods, since its
exports
 had surged by 15.81% compared to 2015.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "go" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "soared" was used 2 times.
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