The chart below shows the different levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart
ilustrates
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illustrates
five levels of post-school qualifications in Australia and the amount of men and women who get that score in 1999. Overall, the man who was in skilled vocational diploma had
highest
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higher
grades with almost 90%, while the woman who was in the same program had
lowest
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the lowest
score by nearly 10 percent.
Besides
, the post-school that was better qualifications in females was
undergraduate diploma
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an undergraduate diploma
with close to 70%, whereas
this
level was
had
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having
less marks in males.
On the other hand
, according the chart, in bachelor’s degree, both
gender
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genders
had likely qualifications with a proportion of almost 50%.
Finally
, the information shows
that in
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that, in
postgraduate diploma and master’s degree man achieve
best
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better
marks than
woman
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women
by under 70% and less than 60
% respectively
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%, respectively
,
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while female get in that program near by 30% and
sligthly
to a small degree or extent
slightly
under 40%, approximately.

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