The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts
illutrates
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illustrate
illustrates
the percentage of
water
used for industrial, agricultural
,
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,
and domestic
use
. Overall, in
asia
the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
ocean
water
is mostly used for agricultural purposes.
On the other hand
, in North America and Europe
water
is mainly used for industry. As presented in the graph North America uses
highest percentage
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the highest percentage
of
water
in industry which is at 48
percent
. Followed by, agricultural used and
doemstic
of concern to or concerning the internal affairs of a nation
domestic
used which
areat
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are at
39 and 13
percent
,
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,
respectively.
Similarly in
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Similarly, in
Europe 53
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Europe, 53
percent
of
water
isused
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is used
for industry and 32
percent
is uses
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uses
is used
for
agricultur
relating to or used in or promoting agriculture or farming
agricultural
agriculture
.
Lastly only
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Lastly, only
15
percent
is domestic
use
. In south America highest
perfcentage
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
of
water
is
use
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used
for agricultural purpose followed by domestic
use
and industrial
use
which is at 19 and 10
percent
,
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,
respectively.. In
Africa Central
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Africa, Central
Asia, and South East
Asia Central
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Asia, Central
Asia has the highest
use
of
water
for
agriculture which
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agriculture, which
is at 88
percent followed
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percent, followed
by Africa and South East Asia which
areat
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are at
84 and 81
percent
,
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,
respectively. In these three countries South East Asia has the highest used of
water
for industrial
use
which is at 12
percent followed
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percent, followed
by Africa and Central
asia
the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
which is at seven and five
percent
, respectively.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
Africa has the highest used of
water
for domestic
use
followed by central
asia
the nations of the Asian continent collectively
Asia
and South East
Asia which
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Asia, which
use
the same amount of
water
which is at seven
percent
.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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