The consumption of the world’s resources (oil, and water etc.) is increasing at a dangerous rate. What are causes and solutions?

It is true that natural resources are depleting day by day at
a
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an
alaming
frightening because of an awareness of danger
alarming
rate because of overusing of
oil
, water, foods etc. Over
poulation
the people who inhabit a territory or state
population
and unscientific method of distribution and
uncontrolable
difficult to solve or alleviate
uncontrollable
consumption
of natural resources are main reason for
this
phenomenon. According to my
perpective
a way of regarding situations or topics etc.
perspective
, we need to act seriously for the prevention of
overconsumption
of natural resources by
implemening
apply in a manner consistent with its purpose or design
implementing
laws and regulation. There are many
reason
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reasons
for the depletion of natural resources.The most
prepondent
a person who pleads for a cause or propounds an idea
proponent
was over
population which
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population, which
increase the demand for basic needs for human being
such
as water for drinking and
production food
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food production
.
Needlesssto
say
,
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,
natural resources are not increasing as per the increasing of population all over the world.
Secondly
,
Transporation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
is unavoidable for the
wellbeing
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well being
of
humanbeing
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human being
which involves
consumption
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the consumption
of
oil
.
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.
People travelling for work
,
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,
lesuire
time available for ease and relaxation
leisure
activites
any specific behavior
activities
,
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,
education and entertainment locally and
internationally which
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internationally, which
is depend
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depends
on motor transport
,
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,
air
transpots
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transports
transport
which are using diesel, petrol
,
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,
etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
are natural resources.
For example
recent survey
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a recent survey
conducted by
world health organisation
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the world health organisation
stated that
oil
reservior
a large or extra supply of something
reservoir
is not enough
for
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For
competing the future needs of people.
Hence
, It is the right time for
compating
the branch of engineering science that studies (with the aid of computers) computable processes and structures
computing
completing
comparing
the issue for human development in
future
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the future
. There are many
solution
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solutions
for preventing the depletion of natural resources.Usage of water and
oil
are necessary which
can not
can not
cannot
not be
aviodable but
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affordable, but
affordable but
avoidable but
we can control the
overusage
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
overuse
overage
by inventing
alternative
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alternative energy solutions
an alternative energy solution
energy
solution.The government should allocate
more fund
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more funding
for inventing renewable
energy
resources and
encourge
contribute to the progress or growth of
encourage
citizons
a native or naturalized member of a state or other political community
citizens
to use more
this
technology rather than
convention mentod
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the convention method
convention method
of
consumption
. As
aresult
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a result
, it will decrease the use of
tradtional
consisting of or derived from tradition
traditional
energy
sources.
For example
,
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,
The united
stateds
the territory occupied by one of the constituent administrative districts of a nation
states
States
stated
of
america
North American republic containing 50 states - 48 conterminous states in North America plus Alaska in northwest North America and the Hawaiian Islands in the Pacific Ocean; achieved independence in 1776
America
developed a
technoloy
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
alternative
to the
oil
cosumption
the process of taking food into the body through the mouth (as by eating)
consumption
makes the more independent on natural
resoures
available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
, developed countries should be more depend on renewable
energy
and
also
helping developing in countries for finding new
technolgyfor
alternative
energy
resources. In conclusion,
overpoulation
too much population
overpopulation
and unscientific method of
consumption
of
main causes
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the main causes
of depleting the natural resources.
USe
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Use
of
alternative
and renewable
energy
resources is the prime
soultion
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
for
this
which preserve the natural resources for the
next
generation.

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