The charts below shows the average percentage in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
These pie charts are illustrating information about the
approximately
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approximate
percentage
of breakfast
, dinner
, lunch
and snacks
in three types of minerals in the United State, which are not good for the
health if there is a high consumption.
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Overall
, it can be seen that,
sodium and saturated fat were the highest Remove the comma
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segment
of the chart in the Change the noun form
segments
dinner
, while
added sugar was the largest segment in snacks
. Furthermore
, the breakfast
was merely the same amount
in the three nutriments
.
The highest Correct your spelling
nutrients
percentage
in
sodium was 43% in Change preposition
of
dinner
, which was double the amount
of added sugar in dinner
. In the
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second
place was Lunch
, with 29%. This
was nearly the same amount
of saturated fat in Lunch
. Breakfast
and Snacks
remained the same percentage
in Sodium, with 14%.
The largest segment in saturated fat was dinner
with 37%. Lunch
experienced a percentage
of 26%, which was 10% larger than breakfast
. Furthermore
, snacks
showed a number of 21%.
Finally
, snacks
considered
the most added sugar, with 42%. Add a missing verb
are considered
Dinner
concluded about half the amount
, with 23%. Moreover
, lunch
and breakfast
were relatively the same amount
, with 19% and 16%.Change the noun form
amounts
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