You bought a TV a week ago but when you got home you discovered it did not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not received any help. write a letter to the company and in your letter: * introduce yourself * explain the problem * and state what action you would like from the company

*my good name is
sukhbir
Change the capitalization
Sukhbir
show examples
singh
Change the capitalization
Singh
show examples
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
belong to village
mundi
Change the capitalization
Mundi
show examples
jamal
Change the capitalization
Jamal
show examples
distt
moga
Change the capitalization
Moga
show examples
in
punjab
Change the capitalization
Punjab
show examples
*well bought the television
few
Change the article
a few
show examples
weeks ago but when got
at
Change preposition
to
show examples
house
Add an article
the house
show examples
it does not work but after
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
try to call
customer
Add an article
the customer
show examples
for
Change preposition
about
show examples
this
problem but they not going
at
Change preposition
to
show examples
my house for repair or new one give to my *
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
will take big action
to
Change preposition
against
show examples
them because they never listen to my foe
this
circumstance

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!
Topic Vocabulary:
  • customer service
  • purchased
  • faulty
  • malfunction
  • resolution
  • prompt
  • replacement
  • refund
  • technician
  • urgent
  • escalate
  • unsatisfactory
  • disappointed
  • appreciate
  • address
What to do next:
Look at other essays: