Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think it is good, others think face to face interaction is essential.

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there are many merits to make new friends through the internet.

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instagram

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telegram so on.With the help of

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,by using social application they can attact with all around the world to instance any foreign people so they can learn alots of their culture knowledge and language and

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they update with environment what ever happens in arounds due to the flow of social media if any incidents will happen they chronic they capture the news with video any circumstance will happen

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,they easly get information regarding to any situation in free of cost *moving on other side, many people argue they must be avoid online system if they want to be update so they must be travel in one place to another place for make new friends as

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Nowadays people make new friends through social networks and internet chat groups. Some people think it is good, others think face to face interaction is essential.

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