You would like to buy some electrical goods at a shop in a near by town. Write a letter to the shop and ask if they have the things you want or whether they will be able to order them. Ask what the prices are and how long they will be able to hold the goods for you

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter to buy Panasonic Television's remote and the model is A6L. In fact,

this

model is very rare and unique. I have already searched on

internet

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, all the websites are out of stock and they have no details when

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they

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will be available. Hope you will have

this

remote your shop is very prominent in

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nearby

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near by

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areas. Probing

further

, in case, if the product is not available at your store as well.

Then

, please pen down and let me know, if you are willing to place the order and how many days it will take to reach up to you, as soon as possible, because

week my cousin's family has been invited

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my place, so

this

television is only the source of entertainment at my home.

Furthermore

, as we know Panasonic company is very renowned and its

assessories

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accessories

are

dearst

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dearest

too. Though, if you can tell me the amount of the goods,

then

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will be very pleased, as well as tell me the exact date of shipment.

Otherwise

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have to find

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the

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them

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another way of entertainment.

Your

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Yours

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sincerly

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sincerely

Mr.

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Peter Smith

Tue Mar 17 2020

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The Closing

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Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
14Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

193 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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The Closing

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