My favorite food is pho. This is also a famous dish of Vietnam. The best and most famous pho is Hanoi. Pho is made from noodles, it is a dish of water so its broth is stewed from bones so it is very sweet and delicious. Pho is usually of two types: Pho Pho and Chicken Pho. In a bowl of pho usually have noodles, beef or chicken, scallions, condiments and broth of Pho are very clea

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Many people today believe that it is easy to want to have a healthy life and to have an unhealthy life. Many of their lives are in front of computer screens, they sit for hours to use it and they become less active.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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