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Some people like to work in small companies or businesses while others prefer working for large companies or government organizations. What are the advantages and disadvantages of working for a large company or organization?

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c)
Mentoring Social
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Mentoring, Social
 Entrepreneurs for Personal
Growth
 Social entrepreneurship starts with the social entrepreneur. The best leaders know themselves
the best
Suggestion
better
. And personal
growth
 starts with self-awareness. I have several tools to help you to become more self-aware. True confession, I have struggled with
this
 one myself, so I have a lot of practice at getting better at
this
. Personal
growth
 might
also
 include self-management, our ability to manage our emotions and
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
behaviour
; social awareness, our
impact
 on others; and relationship management, the foundation of success in any initiative. Personal
growth
 might
also
 include learning new skills or gaining new confidence. d)
Mentoring Social
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Mentoring, Social
 Entrepreneurs for
Impact
 Just as any
business
 has to niche their market, social entrepreneurs must niche their
impact
. While the UN Sustainable Development Goals are a great framework for thinking about development, not many social enterprises can “wipe out global poverty.” A lack of focus on specific, achievable
impact
 goals can dilute your effectiveness. Sometimes social entrepreneurs need
mentoring
Suggestion
mentors
 to help them focus on one specific
impact
 area and plan how to get there.
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Mentoring, Social
 Entrepreneurs for
Business
Growth
 Here’s the thing social entrepreneurs don’t often say out loud to others: If I’m worried about money, I can’t focus on my mission. I know we don’t always like talking about money, but the truth is, we need the dollars to make a difference. A social
business
 is, in the end, a
business
. Businesses survive and thrive from sustainable, profitable
growth
. Social businesses have a social
impact
 only when we sustain the
business
, create profit and grow. Obviously, some nonprofits are doing well. And yet, they must grow a sustainable source of funding to create an
impact
. So, in a sense, money and mission are never totally detached.
Mentoring Social
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Mentoring, Social
 Entrepreneurs for Leadership If you hope to scale your
impact
, and
therefore
 your
business
, at some point you have to multiply your efforts by leading others. Communicating, coaching, creating the culture and other key skills
begin
Suggestion
begins
 to take priority over your technical know-how. You must learn how to attract, recruit, grow, manage, motivate and lead others. I often see
this
 as a bottleneck to
growth
 for startups, moving from a team of cofounders to a team of teams.

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